What stood out to me most in my elevator pitch is my use of vocabulary. I think the most important is to demonstrate the magnitude. I was surprised by all the feedback I got. I definitely have certain aspects to improve upon. I thought this was helpful to see what I was doing wrong. I tried to starts from nothing and rebuild my elevator pitch as I believe it would help it as a whole.
Hi, Ted:
ReplyDeleteI thought your pitch was well-structured, and you did a great job elaborating on each of the points you made. I am in full support of your idea, as I am not a fan of paper straws. I don't know much about straws made from avocado seeds, but I do trust you know what you're talking about after watching your pitch. Also, great job on dressing the part and looking professional.